- The following discussion is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.
The result was: promoted by Allen3 talk 15:42, 7 January 2014 (UTC)
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Lungi Dance
- ... that the song "Lungi Dance" is actually a tribute to Rajinikanth (pictured), a leading South-Indian actor?
- Reviewed: Project Wizard.
Created/expanded by Ethically Yours (talk). Self nominated at 13:20, 30 December 2013 (UTC).
Concern addressed; everything else seems to check out. I changed the word "legendary" to "leading", per WP:PEACOCK. ComputerJA (☎ • ✎) 19:40, 4 January 2014 (UTC)
The nominator has used the same QPQ for Template:Did you know nominations/2014 Snapchat hack. Yoninah (talk) 11:08, 5 January 2014 (UTC)
There are also some copyediting issues. Too much information is in the lead; most of it should be placed in subsections called Background and Release. There is also a grammatical problem with the first sentence under Controversy. It's not clear to me that the image is public domain. Yoninah (talk) 11:15, 5 January 2014 (UTC)
Sorry, but the article still has copyediting issues. I restructured the presentation as I suggested, above, but the Controversy section reads like a list of excerpts from the sources you're quoting. Could you rewrite this so we know who these people are and why they're promoting the song? I took out the plug to Wikipedia; it could be reinserted in a Lyrics section, if you would like to write one. Also, the references need to be formatted with more than the title, publisher, and accessdate. Please see WP:Citing sources. Yoninah (talk) 16:55, 5 January 2014 (UTC)
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