Talk:Victoria Harbour

Latest comment: 17 years ago by Jackp in topic Tourism section?
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User:Huaiwei has insisted not to have the leading paragraphs written in a summary-style, and insisted that some materials are duplicated [1].(See also the edit summaries [2].) — Instantnood 08:22, 26 December 2005 (UTC)

Tourism section?

What is with that section?? No tourist actually enters the harbour! I mean the section should be removed, no one actually says that they want to visit the Harbour, and the section does nothing but tell you that it's famous around the world for it's stunning paranormic views of Hong Kong (which it's not). And all the public events aren't actually held in the harbour, but next to it. Jackp 12:08, 21 July 2006 (UTC)

Grammar

There are many instances of poor grammar and awkward phrasing. A native English speaker should review this article.