Talk:Space Race (Archer)/GA1
Latest comment: 12 years ago by Gen. Quon in topic GA Review
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Reviewer: Gen. Quon (talk · contribs) 23:57, 18 June 2012 (UTC)
I will review this soon.--Gen. Quon (talk) 23:57, 18 June 2012 (UTC)
- Image: Add a FUR rationale to a picture and not just a generic boilerplate one
- Done
- Infobox: I like bullets with my guest stars, but not a biggie
- Done Most episode article have bullets in it.
- Lede: Link third season
- Done
- Lede: "alongside with actor Dave Willis" -> "alongside actor Dave Willis"
- Lede: "The successive episode, although acclaimed by television commentators, produced more fluctuation amongst the critiques, which were more critical of its humor and general execution." What does this mean? First you say it was acclaimed by the critics, but then you say it produced fluctuation amongst the "critiques" (Do you mean 'critics'?). I thought they had already acclaimed it?
- It was acclaimed because of the high ratings given from the critics, but some aspects of "Part II" were criticized as opposed to "Part I". I did reword it, however.
- Plot: "which is set into two modes;" I think that semicolon should be a colon, since its basically functioning as an equals sign
- Done
- Ratings: Maybe explain what a "0.7 rating" is for the layman
- Done
- Reception: I rearranged the last paragraph a bit. But who said the ""Sorry, hilarious as both. As early as the stunning end of the world sequence..." quote?
- Done
- References: Link The A.V. Club and The Onion
- Done
That's all. On hold for seven days.--Gen. Quon (talk) 22:54, 20 June 2012 (UTC)
- Should be good to go now. :) —DAP388 (talk) 02:42, 21 June 2012 (UTC)
- Looks good! I'll pass it.--Gen. Quon (talk) 04:11, 21 June 2012 (UTC)
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