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- This review is transcluded from Talk:Mike Wallace Is Here/GA1. The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review.
Reviewer: Kingsif (talk · contribs) 02:43, 1 January 2020 (UTC)
Opening review Kingsif (talk) 02:43, 1 January 2020 (UTC)
- Cast list could be put into columns
- Accolades could have some prose
- Since Release section is two lines, it could be combined with the Reception (to make Release & reception, e.g.)
- Copyvio check only brings up quotes - looks fine
- Sources look fine
- could wikilink archive footage
- Synopsis could be clearer. The main idea of what the film contains is in the production section, and I'm still not quite sure.
- It's got little coverage for what seems to be a very notable documentary - is there nothing more that can be added?
- On hold - worried about lack of coverage and that it doesn't really say what the film is about. Kingsif (talk) 02:50, 1 January 2020 (UTC)
- Kingsif, All done. The film is a very notable documentary however every interview talks about the same thing including, 1,400 hours of archival footage, Wallace 60 Minutes, etc. ~~ CAPTAIN MEDUSAtalk 13:35, 1 January 2020 (UTC)
- @CAPTAIN MEDUSA: Having a table inside a collapse box is not common and is pretty unsightly because it doesn't fit well inside the box - I undid that. Re. coverage - is there really nothing more on the production? Re. synopsis - is there an order of how things happen, what is meant by 'troubled personal life'? Remember per MOSPLOT, it doesn't need to be things cited, as the film is a reference for itself. If you've seen it, write what it shows. Now I know there's a few old interviews and something else, but not what that is. Kingsif (talk) 21:52, 1 January 2020 (UTC)
- Kingsif, It should be clear now. ~~ CAPTAIN MEDUSAtalk 11:10, 2 January 2020 (UTC)
- @CAPTAIN MEDUSA: Having a table inside a collapse box is not common and is pretty unsightly because it doesn't fit well inside the box - I undid that. Re. coverage - is there really nothing more on the production? Re. synopsis - is there an order of how things happen, what is meant by 'troubled personal life'? Remember per MOSPLOT, it doesn't need to be things cited, as the film is a reference for itself. If you've seen it, write what it shows. Now I know there's a few old interviews and something else, but not what that is. Kingsif (talk) 21:52, 1 January 2020 (UTC)
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