Talk:Mall (song)

Latest comment: 4 years ago by Iaof2017 in topic GA Review
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GA Review

This review is transcluded from Talk:Mall (song)/GA1. The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review.

Reviewer: MarioSoulTruthFan (talk · contribs) 23:14, 17 April 2020 (UTC)


Infobox

  • Genre: Folk rock → folk elements are not part of the gerne, is just influences
 Done--Lorik17 (talk) 10:24, 19 April 2020 (UTC)

Lead

  • Universal Music → Universal Music via digital download and streaming services
  • and fans → remove
  • occasions in Amsterdam and Madrid → occasions, including in Amsterdam and Madrid.
 Done

Background and composition

  • song length → songs length
  • together with → and
  • With a duration time of three minutes, the Albanian language song → The Albanian language song, which lasts three minutes,
  • Add the release dates here
 Done--Lorik17 (talk) 10:25, 19 April 2020 (UTC)

Critical reception

  • President Meta additionally praised his voice and performance → very bias
 Done--Lorik17 (talk) 10:26, 19 April 2020 (UTC)

Music video and promotion

  • intercut ten times, and as the video progresses, it additionally features → intercut several times, and as the video progresses, it features
  • frantic → not very encyclopedic
  • Add the music video source at the end of the description.  Not done
@MarioSoulTruthFan: I hope its correct now.--Lorik17 (talk) 14:36, 19 April 2020 (UTC)
 Done--Lorik17 (talk) 10:38, 19 April 2020 (UTC)

Festivali i Këngës

  • Fine

Lisbon

  • small band of instrumentalists, → remove instrumentalists
 Done--Lorik17 (talk) 10:27, 19 April 2020 (UTC)

Personnel

  • Fine

Track listing

  • Fine

Release history

  • Fine

References

  • Rate Your Music → non-reliable
  • Reference 21 → publisher, not work
  • Reference 33 and 34 → no publisher or work mentioned
  • The voice source is not working properly → archive it
 Done--Lorik17 (talk) 10:36, 19 April 2020 (UTC)

Overall

@MarioSoulTruthFan:  Done--Lorik17 (talk) 11:57, 19 April 2020 (UTC)
@Iaof2017: I made changes to he genre regarding the sources and you forgot something in the music video section. MarioSoulTruthFan (talk) 14:36, 19 April 2020 (UTC)
@MarioSoulTruthFan: Thank you, I followed the comment for the music video section, I hope i did it right.--Lorik17 (talk) 14:38, 19 April 2020 (UTC)