Talk:James Heather
Latest comment: 2 years ago by LunaEatsTuna in topic Feedback from New Page Review process
Feedback from New Page Review process
I left the following feedback for the creator/future reviewers while reviewing this article: Great work, especially with the sourcing! Some pointers: using an encyclopaedic tone means no emotional language such "traumatic" etc., and also try to add related text into larger paragraphs instead of starting a new one with every sentence.
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