Talk:Fjäriln vingad syns på Haga/GA1
Latest comment: 2 years ago by Kyle Peake in topic GA Review
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Reviewer: K. Peake (talk · contribs) 07:24, 9 February 2022 (UTC)
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You seem to have a lot of nominees up for review... --K. Peake 07:24, 9 February 2022 (UTC)
- Very few now, January was crazy. Thanks as always for taking this on. Chiswick Chap (talk) 08:07, 9 February 2022 (UTC)
Infobox and lead
- Infobox looks good!
- Thanks!
- The most popular part should be after the lyrical description part
- Moved.
- Merge both paras since they are too short to standalone
- Done.
- Wikilink Gustav III to itself
- Done.
- "know Fjäril'n vingad by heart; it has been recorded many times" → "know the composition by heart; it has been recorded numerous times"
- Rearranged.
Context
- Good
Song
Music and verse form
- Add relevant text to the audio sample
- Added.
- Pipe rhythming pattern to Rhyme scheme
- Done.
Lyrics
- Add a comma after Adolf Ulrik Kirstein
- Done.
- "describes it as a" → "describes the composition as a
- Done.
- Where are the writing years sourced by [11]?
- Used Massengale instead, as Bellman.net usually does.
- Merge the last para with the above one per overly short size
- Done.
- Wikilink Gustav III to itself, doing the same on img text
- Done.
Reception
- Video looks good!
- Noted.
- Retitle to Reception and legacy
- Done.
- Pipe Solna to Solna Municipality
- Done.
- "in 2005 it was" → "in 2005, the composition was"
- Done.
References
- Copyvio score looks great at 25.4%!!!
- Noted.
- Make sure all date formatting is consistent
- Checked.
- Ref 7 should lead to the Hassler and Dahl source like ref 13 does
- Fixed.
- Fix MOS:QWQ issues with ref 9 and remove Riksarkive from the title, citing as publisher and piping to National Archives of Sweden
- Replaced ref.
- Cite Populär Historia instead for ref 13 and as work/website with the wikilink
- Done.
- Add the language parameter to ref 18
- Added.
- Cite Svensk mediedatabas as publisher on ref 21 with the wikilink, also add the proper title instead
- Done.
- Add the language parameter to ref 23 and wikilink Zecchino d'Oro
- Done.
- Wikilink Sveriges Radio on ref 27
- Done.
- Wikilink Nimbus Records on ref 29
- Done.
Sources
- Pipe G. Schirmer to G. Schirmer, Inc.
- Done.
- Pipe Simon and Schuster to Simon & Schuster
- Done.
External links
- Remove the Anders Stävarby link per WP:RSPYT
- Gone.
Final comments and verdict
On hold until all of the issues are fixed! --K. Peake 09:00, 9 February 2022 (UTC)
- Many thanks, that seems to be everything. Chiswick Chap (talk) 10:15, 9 February 2022 (UTC)
- Chiswick Chap ✓ Pass time, very satisfied with your speed once again and I briefly copyedited the lead! --K. Peake 21:40, 9 February 2022 (UTC)
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