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Thanks for the review. User:Ms Sarah Welch who has collaborated with me will also clarify some issues raised by you.
Lead
Who is Cheever Mackenzie Brown?
Added, with source
Brahman (ultimate metaphysical Reality), from her arise Prakṛti ..."and" from her...
Done by @Nvvchar
she is bliss and non-bliss, the Vedas and what is different from it, the born and the unborn, and all of the universe make this a separate line.
Done by @Nvvchar
Foundation and structure
Link Brahman
Done
asserts that from Goddess "the" Goddess
Done by @Nvvchar
Contents
Brahman should be linked in the earlier section, not here.
Agreed. Done. All later duplinks removed.
Is not the definition of Brahman getting repeated here?
Yes. Removed repetition. The sources have been checked and moved to the sections above.
In the 2nd line, italics have not been used properly.
Corrected.
Identify Griffith, McDaniel
Added, with source/wikilink.
"Begat" is an archaic word. Use modern spellings
Yes. Rephrased after checking source.
All knowing knowledge What does this mean?
Probably a drafting error. Changed to "All knowledge...".
Influence in Tantra
Simply say McDaniel.
Done by @Nvvchar
Duplinks: mantra, shakti, Saraswati
Done by @Nvvchar
List of duplinks:
Who is the Goddess? - Purusha, Prakrti
The sources assert she is both. Duplinks removed.
Devi stuti and iconography - Vedas,Rudras,Adityas,Soma,Prajapati, Indra
Removed.
@Sainsf: I also removed all cites from the lead, something that required moving some text and all sources to the main article. So you will see two new sections Etymology and History. @Nvvchar: Please double check my edits and if I missed anything or duplinks, please fix. Ms Sarah Welch (talk) 17:36, 3 February 2016 (UTC)
@Sainsf: The lead and the text have been slightly reorganized in view of shiting of refrences from the lead. Other wise all review issue have been addressed.Nvvchar. 01:04, 4 February 2016 (UTC)
