Talk:2003 Bawean incident
Latest comment: 9 months ago by SunDawn in topic Feedback from New Page Review process
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Primary Source is a blog
A lot of this looks like a close paraphrase or copy of the english google translation of a blog. This needs to be significantly reworded and a reliable source needs to be cited instead of a self-published, unreliable blog. See WP:RS. --Dual Freq (talk) 21:14, 12 September 2023 (UTC)
- I trimmed out the material cited solely by the blogspot.com blog which was mostly citing a unneeded, one-sided, play by play of the interception. I'm not against readding some of the material if it can be reliably sourced and vital to the article, but an extremely detailed account by a single side of the interception is not needed. --Dual Freq (talk) 13:57, 16 September 2023 (UTC)
Feedback from New Page Review process
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