Talk:1993 Women's Cricket World Cup final/GA1
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Latest comment: 4 years ago by AhmadLX in topic GA Review
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Reviewer: AhmadLX (talk · contribs) 18:43, 7 May 2020 (UTC)
I will review this. AhmadLX-(Wikiposta) 18:43, 7 May 2020 (UTC)
The article largely meets the criteria. A few minor points follow:
- "However, in response, New Zealand enacted five run outs; the New Zealand captain,..." It should be mentioned here that NZ won the match. Currently it remains unclear and only a couple lines later does one know that from Raf Nicholson's comment.
- Oops, added. Harrias talk 16:16, 8 May 2020 (UTC)
- " England scored 208 for five, aided by..." → "England scored 208 for five; aided by..." OR "England scored 208 for five. Aided by..."
- Changed to a semi-colon. Harrias talk 16:16, 8 May 2020 (UTC)
- "New Zealand were restricted to 154 runs by India, but three run outs and miserly bowling helped them to a 42-run victory." miserly bowling? It sounds like inadequate or deficient bowling by NZ.
- Probably too jargon-y: changed to "economic". Harrias talk 16:16, 8 May 2020 (UTC)
- "Tea was taken after 30 overs of the New Zealand innings: shortly thereafter..." → "Tea was taken after 30 overs of the New Zealand innings. Shortly thereafter..."
- "Shortly thereafter two more wickets fell;" → "Shortly thereafter two more wickets fell:" i.e. colon instead of semicolon.
- Done both of these. Harrias talk 16:16, 8 May 2020 (UTC)
- Umpires: Valerie Gibbens and Judith West. This should be referenced.
- Added. Harrias talk 16:16, 8 May 2020 (UTC)
- "The England captain, Smithies reflected..." → "The England captain Smithies reflected..." OR "The England captain, Smithies, reflected..."
- Changed as suggested. Harrias talk 16:16, 8 May 2020 (UTC)
- "Former England player Sarah Potter said that "Progress..."". Either remove quotation marks and rephrase the quote or remove "that".
- Removed "that". Harrias talk 16:16, 8 May 2020 (UTC)
- @AhmadLX: Thanks for the review; I have responded to each point above. Harrias talk 16:16, 8 May 2020 (UTC)
Pass. A nice article. AhmadLX-(Wikiposta) 17:18, 8 May 2020 (UTC)
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