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22:5322:53, 25 May 2020diff hist −2‎ The infernal names‎ →‎The Infernal Names: Fix a name, based on info from the linked articleTags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit

17:3517:35, 24 May 2020diff hist −53‎ Curse and mark of Cain‎ →‎Priesthood ban: rm very broad & unsourced generalization
10:5410:54, 24 May 2020diff hist +75‎ Cain and Abel‎ →‎Jewish and Christian interpretations: 1st paragraph: The article stated that Cain hadn't received instructions or done anything wrong, but the Bible text doesn't actually specify if he did *or* didn't.
10:2110:21, 24 May 2020diff hist +136‎ Leukemia‎ →‎Acute lymphoblastic: add "clarify" tag – what is the purpose of lumbar punctures?
08:4008:40, 24 May 2020diff hist −7‎ Rebaptism‎ →‎In the Catholic Church: Small NPOV: "admit" is probably meant in some technical sense here, but colloquially, it could be taken as meaning they refuse to acknowledge something which is nevertheless true. Rewording to remove that connotation.
08:2808:28, 24 May 2020diff hist −43‎ Rebaptism‎ rm misplaced, unsourced statement. If a particular denomination and/or notable theologian uses this passage to justify re-baptism, please provide source and put in the appropriate section.

11:3911:39, 23 May 2020diff hist −27‎ Holocaust victims‎ →‎Scope of usage: rm ethnic slur (would any other ethnicity be accompanied by a slur?)
07:4307:43, 23 May 2020diff hist +606‎ Talk:Naji al-Ali‎ →‎Location of bullet wound: new section
06:0306:03, 23 May 2020diff hist −74‎ Social parasitism (offense)‎ →‎Usage: rm ethnic slur (we wouldn't include a parenthetical slur for any other ethnicity)
05:2605:26, 23 May 2020diff hist +11‎ Soft coup‎ →‎Notable cases: add "Zimbabwean" cause it didn't say where Mugabe was from

07:4907:49, 22 May 2020diff hist +2‎ Unisex name‎ →‎Indian languages: missing spaces
06:3406:34, 22 May 2020diff hist +302‎ Maiden and married names‎ →‎Legal status of male name changes at marriage: fix incomplete refs
06:2406:24, 22 May 2020diff hist −16‎ Maiden and married names‎ →‎Common options: NPOVing
04:5304:53, 22 May 2020diff hist −33‎ Most wanted list‎ →‎Most wanted lists: remove red link with no explanation or source
03:1903:19, 22 May 2020diff hist +5‎ Nosism‎ →‎Editorial we{{Anchor|Editorial we}}: no need for gendered pronouns here
03:0303:03, 22 May 2020diff hist −8‎ Irving Dardik‎ →‎Honors: NPOV
02:4702:47, 22 May 2020diff hist −14‎ Irving Dardik‎ npov

22:5922:59, 19 May 2020diff hist +1‎ Five Ks‎ →‎Kachera: fix wikilink
19:3319:33, 19 May 2020diff hist +1‎ Comparison of Islamic and Jewish dietary laws‎ →‎Differences: missing space
19:2319:23, 19 May 2020diff hist +99‎ Comparison of Islamic and Jewish dietary laws‎ Undid revision 956782301 by Foxyc78 (talk) Those are not "extra" words. The sentences are incomplete without them, without at least a little additional editing.Tag: Undo

15:2615:26, 18 May 2020diff hist −182‎ Suspension (punishment)‎ →‎Out-of-School Suspension: make more concise
15:2315:23, 18 May 2020diff hist −98‎ Plum Island (Wisconsin)‎ →‎References: rm unnecessary reference – basic grammatical corrections don't need in-article citations
15:1915:19, 18 May 2020diff hist +29‎ Grounding (discipline technique)‎ grammar, conciseness, remove unhelpful vagueness
15:1815:18, 18 May 2020diff hist −34‎ Emergency Broadcast System‎ Undid revision 955562701 by 2604:6000:120B:81B1:15AC:4E66:E79C:6A90 (talk) RVVTag: Undo
02:3302:33, 18 May 2020diff hist +184‎ Morlock‎ add source that Morlachs provides for the claim that Morlachs inspired Morlocks
02:1002:10, 18 May 2020diff hist −5‎ Morlachs‎ →‎Legacy: Rm slur. This is neither presented as a direct quote, nor essential to understanding the meaning. Per WP:OM, slurs are permitted "if and only if its omission would cause the article to be less informative, relevant, or accurate, and no equally suitable alternative is available."

04:4804:48, 17 May 2020diff hist +39‎ Sibling‎ →‎Pseudo: unreferenced section
04:3704:37, 17 May 2020diff hist +14‎ Sibling‎ →‎God: wikilink
04:3104:31, 17 May 2020diff hist +16‎ Sibling‎ →‎Horizontal: clarify – they are always first cousins, because their (non-shared) parents are siblings.
04:2704:27, 17 May 2020diff hist +43‎ Sibling‎ →‎{{anchor|Half-sibling}} Half: theoretical possibility of 0% shared genes – clarify language for folks who have less prior knowledge of genetics (more clarification is probably possible)
02:0502:05, 17 May 2020diff hist −156‎ Birth control in Japan‎ →‎History: Remove undersourced claim that abortion providers were responsible for keeping birth control illegal: resembles common anti-abortion conspiracy theory, so extra scrutiny is appropriate. Also assorted grammar & readability improvements.
01:2301:23, 17 May 2020diff hist +16‎ Nishiyama Onsen Keiunkan‎ →‎Description: add Template:Inconsistent – info about the company Yushima contradicts prior section

22:2422:24, 16 May 2020diff hist −13‎ Steven Hyde‎ rv back further (original "undo" didn't catch it all)
22:2322:23, 16 May 2020diff hist −133‎ Jackie Burkhart‎ rv: unsourced

23:4023:40, 15 May 2020diff hist +180‎ List of fictional games‎ →‎Combat sports: Large re-write to Hunger Games – it's not really "teams of two," ultimately it's every participant for themself. Plus other clarifications and additions.
23:2023:20, 15 May 2020diff hist +106‎ List of fictional games‎ →‎Athletic sports: clarify that "Taking the Stone" is only *usually* non-fatal

07:2307:23, 14 May 2020diff hist −4‎ Iddah‎ →‎Interpretation: correction
05:5005:50, 14 May 2020diff hist −543‎ Sibling‎ →‎Twins: Condense unnecessarily long narrative down to brief summary

18:3118:31, 12 May 2020diff hist +4‎ Linden Lab‎ →‎Corporate culture: wikilink

19:1919:19, 11 May 2020diff hist +11‎ Namus‎ →‎Gender: Fix 2 references
19:0319:03, 11 May 2020diff hist +154‎ ISBN‎ add clarification to intro – this is what I came to learn about, and it was confusing that the intro appeared to contradict the actual book listing I was looking at, which had both
03:4503:45, 11 May 2020diff hist +23‎ Animal-borne bomb attacks‎ →‎Afghanistan: What camp? Where?

06:5606:56, 9 May 2020diff hist +21‎ Grama (halacha)‎ →‎See also: Add Pikuach nefesh – the article seems to allude to it, and it's also related to the question of when and how Shabbat rules may be suspended

17:5817:58, 5 May 2020diff hist +42‎ Grounding (discipline technique)‎ grammar and more inclusivity
17:5417:54, 5 May 2020diff hist −36‎ Emergency Broadcast System‎ rv removal of sourceTag: Undo
16:3816:38, 5 May 2020diff hist −59‎ Kill switch‎ rv: please provide source for the computers being able to detect accidents in particularTag: Undo
16:2916:29, 5 May 2020diff hist −30‎ Suspension (punishment)‎ rv addition of redundant info, removal of relevant info, and unnecessary, vague, informal language
16:2016:20, 5 May 2020diff hist −244‎ Runaway (dependent)‎ →‎Causes: rv: not found in the given source (please give page number if I just missed it), also not the subject of this sectionTag: Undo
16:0016:00, 5 May 2020diff hist +24‎ Eritrea‎ →‎Cuisine: Reinstate more readable version, modified to reflect criticism. Please take any additional concerns to the talk page so this doesn't become an edit war.
15:5715:57, 5 May 2020diff hist +2,762‎ Talk:Eritrea‎ →‎Eritrean beverages: Start section

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