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08:4608:46, 6 February 2024diff hist −4‎ Water pumping‎ →‎Origins: rmv superfluous "one" before person's nameTags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
02:2002:20, 6 February 2024diff hist 0‎ Rocky Point, Jamaica‎ update verb tensecurrentTags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
01:3101:31, 6 February 2024diff hist 0‎ Francesco Rinaldi‎ →‎History: correct "to" to "of" for lexical consistencycurrentTags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit

02:1402:14, 5 February 2024diff hist −37‎ Ames Monument‎ rmv name of non-notable photographer (no Wikipedia article) from caption per MOS:CREDITSTags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
02:0502:05, 5 February 2024diff hist −6‎ Ames Monument‎ →‎Richardsonian design: rmv peacockish "Noted" per MOS:PEATags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit

19:0819:08, 4 February 2024diff hist 0‎ J. Kenji López-Alt‎ →‎After The Food Lab (2016 to present): update verb tense
02:3402:34, 4 February 2024diff hist +11‎ The Lady Vanishes‎ per MOS:RELTIME, correct ambiguous and meaningless "to date" to "as of January 2021", the date of the cited refTags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit

11:1611:16, 2 February 2024diff hist −6‎ Eleanor Post Hutton‎ no justification for enclosing surnames in scare quotes; her mother married Hutton once, she didn't remarry himcurrentTags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit

15:4215:42, 30 January 2024diff hist 0‎ Pilcrow‎ →‎Use in Latin: correct link pipe "|kaput" to "|caput": the Latin word is and always was "caput", not "kaput"—if using "K" as an abbreviation for "caput" must be explained, explain it, don't make up a Latin word
15:2415:24, 30 January 2024diff hist −4‎ Conch‎ →‎Pearls: rmv unsupported editorial puffery "and attractive" per MOS:PEA, MOS:OPED, etc; rmv redundant (following "unique") verbiage "of their own"; ¶ needs refs

04:4104:41, 29 January 2024diff hist −10‎ The Original Amateur Hour‎ →‎Television debut (1948–1954): rmv peacockish "memorable" per MOS:PEATags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
03:0103:01, 29 January 2024diff hist −7‎ Travertine‎ →‎Uses: rmv peacockish "famous" per MOS:PEATags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
00:5800:58, 29 January 2024diff hist +5‎ Administrative divisions of New York (state)‎ →‎Hamlet: correct "Hamlets often have names corresponding to the names of a local school district [...]" to "A hamlet often has a name corresponding to the name of a local school district [...]" for the sake of grammatical agreement
00:4900:49, 29 January 2024diff hist +4‎ Administrative divisions of New York (state)‎ →‎Hamlet: link in caption to Sand Lake, New York
00:4000:40, 29 January 2024diff hist −4‎ Watervliet‎ →‎See also: one active link per dab page entry

04:5104:51, 28 January 2024diff hist −3‎ Fuji (apple)‎ →‎Overview: correct "between" to "from" ("from x to[or dash] y" is correct; "between x to y" is incorrect)Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit

10:4710:47, 27 January 2024diff hist +1‎ Miles Routledge‎ →‎Later trips: correct comma splice to semicolon; correct "wouldn't" to "would not" per MOS:N'TTags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
10:4010:40, 27 January 2024diff hist −8‎ Miles Routledge‎ →‎Fall of Kabul: correct two ambiguous verb phrases using "would" to simple past indicativesTags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit

14:0314:03, 26 January 2024diff hist −7‎ Punnet‎ →‎Prior form: rmv ", right" from "(see illustration)", because the image is oriented differently on mobile device displaysTags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit

11:1311:13, 22 January 2024diff hist −19‎ Night Fever‎ rmv unencyclopedic, peacockish editorializing "more impressively" per MOS:OPED, MOS:PEA, etcTags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
08:5208:52, 22 January 2024diff hist −10‎ Gallia Narbonensis‎ rmv instructional and unnecessary "note that" from image caption per MOS:NOTETags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit

12:0812:08, 21 January 2024diff hist −24‎ Matthew Arnold‎ →‎Death: rmv "He was survived by", which adds nothing but triteness to "His wife died in June 1901", per MOS:SURVIVEDBYTags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
12:0012:00, 21 January 2024diff hist −11‎ Matthew Arnold‎ rmv peacockish adjective "celebrated" per MOS:PEATags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
01:0701:07, 21 January 2024diff hist −1‎ Riley Keough‎ rmv errant comma

15:4115:41, 20 January 2024diff hist −23‎ Carlo Buonaparte‎ →‎Rise to prominence: rmv peacockish "famous" per MOS:PEA; rmv comma from restrictive appositive (he had more than one son); rmv given name per MOS:SURNAME
15:1815:18, 20 January 2024diff hist −6‎ Hôtel de Soubise‎ →‎History: rmv peacockish "famous" per MOS:PEA
15:1415:14, 20 January 2024diff hist −6‎ Soubise‎ rmv peacockish "noted" per MOS:PEAcurrent
04:2904:29, 20 January 2024diff hist −63‎ Boerum Hill‎ →‎Culture: prune verbiage and redundancies; rmv comma from restrictive appositive: Clockers isn't Spike Lee's only movie, so naming it isn't optional; link Gowanus Housescurrent
04:1104:11, 20 January 2024diff hist −27‎ Boerum Hill‎ →‎History: rmv meaninglessly ambiguous "In recent decades", which is redundant with and inferior to the specific "since about the late 1990s" immediately following, per MOS:RELTIME; rmv unjustified italics from the names of two Mohawk reserves in Canada
03:5903:59, 20 January 2024diff hist −2‎ Boerum Hill‎ correct "Smith or Court Streets" to "Smith or Court Street" and "Warren or Wyckoff Streets" to "Warren or Wyckoff Street"
03:5603:56, 20 January 2024diff hist +4‎ Alessandro Nivola‎ →‎Personal life: a few commas help parse a confusing sentence
03:4703:47, 20 January 2024diff hist −9‎ Alessandro Nivola‎ →‎Career: rmv peacockish "heralded" per MOS:PEA

21:5221:52, 17 January 2024diff hist −17‎ Levon (song)‎ →‎Notable covers and performances: rmv errant comma; rmv peacockish "highly regarded" per MOS:PEATags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
21:4821:48, 17 January 2024diff hist 0‎ Levon (song)‎ →‎History: rmv errant comma from restrictive appositive (Robertson wasn't his only fellow Band member); correct "didn't" to "did not" per MOS:N'TTags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
18:5718:57, 17 January 2024diff hist 0‎ 2024 Rochester attack‎ →‎Attack: third victim was femaleTags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
07:2707:27, 17 January 2024diff hist −11‎ Rickey Henderson‎ →‎Legacy: rmv instructional "(at right)", because the quotation box isn't displayed at the right on all devicesTags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit

20:0920:09, 16 January 2024diff hist −8‎ Jean Harlow‎ →‎1932–1937: Successful actress at MGM: rmv peacockish "skilled" per MOS:PEA
20:0820:08, 16 January 2024diff hist −10‎ Jean Harlow‎ →‎Legacy: rmv peacockish "Legendary" per MOS:PEA
19:4119:41, 16 January 2024diff hist −7‎ Blue Moon (1934 song)‎ →‎Background: rmv peacockish "famous" per MOS:PEA
19:1519:15, 16 January 2024diff hist 0‎ Sharon Temple‎ →‎The Children of Peace: relocate " State" inside link pipe ("New York State" reads better than "New York State")current
19:1119:11, 16 January 2024diff hist −48‎ Sharon Temple‎ rmv unjustified scare quotes and link pipe from The Children of Peace; rmv peacockish "distinctive" and correct "architectural gem" to "building", per MOS:PEA

14:1314:13, 15 January 2024diff hist −4‎ Osmium‎ →‎Physical properties: correct "more dense" to "denser" per standard English dictionariesTags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit

06:1906:19, 14 January 2024diff hist −2‎ Air Peace‎ →‎Founding: correct biased "claims" to neutral "says" per MOS:SAY

21:1821:18, 11 January 2024diff hist +104‎ Margie Hendrix‎ very much miscellaneous relatively minor cleanup including (but not limited to) punctuation errors and correcting given names to surnames per MOS:SURNAME, "struggled with" to "experienced" per MOS:EUPHEMISM and "claim" to "say" per MOS:SAY; refs needed in Death section

23:4323:43, 10 January 2024diff hist −5‎ Peter Ford (actor)‎ correct five instances of "Peter" to "Ford" per MOS:SURNAME
20:5720:57, 10 January 2024diff hist +24‎ Quinn O'Hara‎ →‎Death: need reliable source of her husband's being "some two decades her junior", which is not stated in the two cited obituariesTags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
11:4511:45, 10 January 2024diff hist −5‎ Myra Breckinridge (film)‎ →‎Development: correct biased "claimed" to neutral "said" per MOS:SAYTags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
11:0511:05, 10 January 2024diff hist +9‎ Stan Jones (songwriter)‎ →‎Death: added state name for readers who don't know where Douglas isTags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit

08:2608:26, 8 January 2024diff hist −6‎ Cairo, New York‎ →‎Notable people: rmv peacockish "noted" per MOS:PEATags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit

01:5501:55, 5 January 2024diff hist +27‎ Clinton Power Station‎ "today" is uselessly ambiguous and should be replaced by a year or other specific as-of date, per MOS:RELTIMETags: Reverted Mobile edit Mobile web edit

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