User contributions for 24.62.100.100

9 July 2009

• 10:4710:47, 9 July 2009diff hist −39‎ Felid hybrids‎ →‎Ocelot-cougar hybrids: Speculative, unsubstansiated, opinionary.

6 July 2009

• 06:0406:04, 6 July 2009diff hist 0‎ Tom Pendergast‎ →‎Early years: Replaciing antiquated word with more common, and easily understandable word.
• 04:2404:24, 6 July 2009diff hist −48‎ Bruce Carradine‎No edit summary
• 04:0204:02, 6 July 2009diff hist +461‎ Bruce Carradine‎No edit summary
• 03:4703:47, 6 July 2009diff hist −12‎ Michael Richards‎ →‎Cameo roles and guest appearances: 'Miami Vice was not a "sitcom". Other titles well known, don't require descriptor.

5 July 2009

• 18:3918:39, 5 July 2009diff hist +6‎ Anthony Daniels‎ →‎Behind the Scenes: Was not "dubbing" by definition, and "some scenes" uses an unneeded descriptor.
• 05:4505:45, 5 July 2009diff hist −45‎ Michael Jackson (radio commentator)‎ →‎Death of Michael Jackson (the singer): "Music legend" verbost, opinionary, un-encyclopedic. While of questionable relevancy, The blurb certainly does not require a seperate section on this page.
• 05:4105:41, 5 July 2009diff hist −180‎ Michael Jackson (radio commentator)‎ →‎Later years: Totally innapropriate and opinionary comment, more akin to a personal political opinion. Highly biased. Un-encyclopedic
• 05:3705:37, 5 July 2009diff hist −25‎ Alan Ladd‎ →‎Personal life

4 July 2009

• 18:4918:49, 4 July 2009diff hist −51‎ Ritz Brothers‎ →‎Movie career
• 18:4618:46, 4 July 2009diff hist +3‎ Ritz Brothers‎ →‎Movie career: The appearances were not always "cameos". 'Blazing Stewardesses' has them billed prominently.
• 18:4418:44, 4 July 2009diff hist −302‎ Ritz Brothers‎ →‎Movie career: Deleting entirely opinionary paragraph with writer announcing his/her opinion of what was their worst film. Innapropriate, review like, un-encyclopedic.
• 18:4018:40, 4 July 2009diff hist −6‎ Ritz Brothers‎ The Ritz Brothers did not appear in films only in the 1930s as the phrasing inferred. Innacuarate descriptor removed.
• 18:3618:36, 4 July 2009diff hist +6‎ Joe DeRita‎ →‎Career with The Three Stooges: Previous form of sentence is speculative "Had Moe not died, they would have". Poor writing. Un-encyclopedic.
• 18:3418:34, 4 July 2009diff hist −64‎ Joe DeRita‎ →‎Career with The Three Stooges: His Gentile status is mentioned later in the article. Redundant here.
• 18:2918:29, 4 July 2009diff hist −14‎ Joe DeRita‎ →‎Career with The Three Stooges: Un-needed opinionary descriptor. Un-encyclopedic.
• 17:5517:55, 4 July 2009diff hist +3‎ James Reavis‎ Re-wrote phrase for narrative flow.

3 July 2009

• 18:5618:56, 3 July 2009diff hist −10‎ Ann Savage‎ →‎Detour (1945)
• 18:5418:54, 3 July 2009diff hist +2‎ Ann Savage‎ →‎Detour (1945)
• 07:3307:33, 3 July 2009diff hist −62‎ The New World (2005 film)‎ →‎External links: Deleting link to personal blog, unverified research. Possible self promotion.
• 07:3207:32, 3 July 2009diff hist −63‎ The Soloist‎ →‎External links: Deleting link to personal blog, unverified research. Possible self promotion.
• 07:3107:31, 3 July 2009diff hist −63‎ Collateral (film)‎ →‎External links: Deleting link to personal blog, unverified research. Possible self promotion.
• 07:2907:29, 3 July 2009diff hist −64‎ The Girlfriend Experience‎ Link to personal blog - unverified original research. Possible self promotion.
• 07:2307:23, 3 July 2009diff hist −64‎ The Curious Case of Benjamin Button (film)‎ →‎External links: Link to personal blog of no known notability. Possible self promotion.
• 07:1807:18, 3 July 2009diff hist +5‎ The Curious Case of Benjamin Button (film)‎ →‎Controversy: Term overstates the amount of coverage this claim is recieving, and is borderline opinionary. It hardly constitutes a "controversy".

2 July 2009

• 20:2120:21, 2 July 2009diff hist +3‎ Little Big Man (film)‎ Younger Bear is comically dominated by his robust Swedish wife.
• 08:0008:00, 2 July 2009diff hist +89‎ La Puente, California‎ →‎Notable natives
• 07:4407:44, 2 July 2009diff hist −468‎ List of films in the public domain in the United States‎ 'Dickson Greeting' is in the public domain in the U.S., made before 1922, other references irrelevant as to status elswhere in the world.Tag: references removed
• 07:4007:40, 2 July 2009diff hist −199‎ List of films in the public domain in the United States‎ Caligari is in the Public Domain in the United States. It should not have been removed. Copyright status outside the U.S. is irrelevant to the article.
• 07:3407:34, 2 July 2009diff hist −153‎ List of films in the public domain in the United States‎ Nosferatu's copyright status in Germany is not relevant here. The list is about public domain films in the United States. Refrence is pointless on this page.
• 07:1807:18, 2 July 2009diff hist −2‎ Detour (1945 film)‎ →‎Plot: "The Stranger", "The owner of the car"?? Haskell's name is known and mentioned many times by the lead characters. Lazy writing, Un-encyclopedic.

1 July 2009

• 08:5408:54, 1 July 2009diff hist −1‎ Dillinger (1945 film)‎No edit summary
• 05:5505:55, 1 July 2009diff hist −266‎ Richard Anderson‎ Innapropriate, gushing, obituary like, opinionary paragraph. Un-encyclopedic.
• 05:5305:53, 1 July 2009diff hist −11‎ Richard Anderson‎ Re-writing odd sounding, speculative comment. Un-encyclopedic.
• 05:5205:52, 1 July 2009diff hist +74‎ The Six Million Dollar Man‎ →‎Overview: Wording, whenever it was written, implied the show was currently in production. Revison was needed to show current status.

30 June 2009

• 08:2808:28, 30 June 2009diff hist +38‎ Bobby Jones (golfer)‎No edit summary

29 June 2009

• 19:4219:42, 29 June 2009diff hist +4‎ A Patch of Blue‎No edit summary
• 19:4019:40, 29 June 2009diff hist +56‎ A Patch of Blue‎ Turner Entertainment, not TNT, undertook the colorization process. Re-wrote poorly written passages.
• 08:1908:19, 29 June 2009diff hist −470‎ The Cabinet of Dr. Caligari‎ →‎Adaptations and musical works inspired by the film: Irrelevant tangent, factually innaccuarate, opinionary, films were not 1st and 2nd horror films made Un-encyclopedic, fan page like entry.,Tag: references removed
• 06:3206:32, 29 June 2009diff hist +6‎ Commodus‎ →‎Character and motivations: Assumptive as to person's possible motivations, or lack thereof.
• 06:2806:28, 29 June 2009diff hist 0‎ Historical accuracy of Gladiator (2000 film)‎ →‎Historical: She was not murdered "by the orders", but as a result of the orders being carried out. Understandable in context, but improper grammar.
• 06:2606:26, 29 June 2009diff hist +6‎ Historical accuracy of Gladiator (2000 film)‎ →‎Historical: We-written as previous editor speaks of Commodus' "intention", as if he is priivy to to Commodus' private thoughts. Assumes intent of long dead person. Un-encyclopedic, speculative.
• 06:0706:07, 29 June 2009diff hist +11‎ Joking Apart‎ →‎DVD release: Sentence was non-sensical by ommission (restore the disc)
• 03:2403:24, 29 June 2009diff hist −5‎ Something (Beatles song)‎ →‎Cover versions: Odd sounding "And even Ray Charles", ancillary term deleted for improved flow.

28 June 2009

• 07:3907:39, 28 June 2009diff hist +1‎ Ganja & Hess‎ George had died, that is needed information in a plot summary.
• 07:3607:36, 28 June 2009diff hist +3‎ Bill Gunn (writer)‎No edit summary
• 07:2707:27, 28 June 2009diff hist +1‎ To Die For (1989 film)‎ It's a title, not a "name".
• 06:2706:27, 28 June 2009diff hist −171‎ Stiltskin‎ →‎Line-up: Credits musicians with track credits in the lineup, which is album information not needed here, and never mentions albums tracks are from in any case.
• 06:2106:21, 28 June 2009diff hist −79‎ Stiltskin‎ →‎Career: Very biased and overtly so. Implies the current lineup is not really Stiltskin, referencing original in past tense. Opinion bordering on vandalism, un-encyclopedic.
• 04:0704:07, 28 June 2009diff hist −52‎ The Man Who Knew Too Much (1956 film)‎ →‎Plot: Deleting opinionary comment "shows no emotion", and rewriting sentence for improved narrative flow after deletion.